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Post by Nickim on Nov 19, 2003 14:46:22 GMT -5
Here's one for Wednesdays
Smutty Wednesday fun
Waiting for our two heroes
The fanged ones with soul
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Post by RAKSHA on Nov 20, 2003 7:24:10 GMT -5
Joker in the deck
Plays between Heaven and Hell
Spike is the wild card.
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Post by Nickim on Nov 20, 2003 8:03:21 GMT -5
Angel, Dru and Spike
Trio full of debased love
The cup awaits Whom?
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Post by S'ewing S'cubie on Nov 20, 2003 9:42:13 GMT -5
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Post by RAKSHA on Nov 20, 2003 13:08:03 GMT -5
Cloaked in night's glamor,
Dark Angel's vision-plagued child
Finds a shining poet
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Post by ldelrossi on Nov 20, 2003 20:58:50 GMT -5
I love your last one Gail. I'll try.
Alone in shadows
He watches from the rooftops
Protecting all souls.
Sweeping black duster
Now suits among the lawyers
Which one fits him best?
Eve is beautiful
But her heart is black and cruel
Who is she really?
Drunken layabout
His father's cruel mockery
Now a world of blood.
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Post by RAKSHA on Nov 20, 2003 21:07:27 GMT -5
I love your last one Gail. I'll try. Alone in shadows He watches from the rooftops Protecting all souls. Sweeping black duster Now suits among the lawyers Which one fits him best? Eve is beautiful But her heart is black and cruel Who is she really? Drunken layabout His father's cruel mockery Now a world of blood.
GAIL ;D |
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Post by LadyDi on Nov 21, 2003 14:30:02 GMT -5
My own humble offering.... Slayer-loving freak soul on fire to save the world poem like a sneeze Thank you  |
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Post by SpringSummers on Nov 21, 2003 17:15:20 GMT -5
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Post by Linda on Nov 23, 2003 3:50:49 GMT -5
Demonic visage Strides through Chaos with a grin Well, this is just ... neat OR Demonically, He strides through Chaos grinning "Well, this is just ... neat." Your choice on whether you want to evoke the moment or the man... Hey Vlad! Lookee here! It's not all about structure But evocation.  |
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Post by LadyDi on Nov 23, 2003 17:38:19 GMT -5
Demonic visage Strides through Chaos with a grin Well, this is just ... neat OR Demonically, He strides through Chaos grinning "Well, this is just ... neat." Your choice on whether you want to evoke the moment or the man... Hey Vlad! Lookee here! It's not all about structure But evocation. Ooh, I cast my vote for the first version. Brilliant. |
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Post by RAKSHA on Nov 23, 2003 20:26:18 GMT -5
Demonic visage Strides through Chaos with a grin Well, this is just ... neat OR Demonically, He strides through Chaos grinning "Well, this is just ... neat." Your choice on whether you want to evoke the moment or the man...
GAIL |
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Post by Linda on Nov 25, 2003 16:22:55 GMT -5
How about:
Wiccan Amazon
Though sometimes callous and strange,
Always lovable
Also,
Thanks LadyDi and RAKSHA for the feedback!
(Sorry, but we used to do these poems as school assignments when I was in 3rd(?) grade and I got into the habit...)
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Post by Nan-S'cubie Mascot on Nov 26, 2003 15:59:29 GMT -5
Demonic visage Strides through Chaos with a grin Well, this is just ... neat OR Demonically, He strides through Chaos grinning "Well, this is just ... neat." Your choice on whether you want to evoke the moment or the man... Hey Vlad! Lookee here! It's not all about structure But evocation. I like the first one a lot, too! |
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Post by Nickim on Nov 29, 2003 13:19:18 GMT -5
Buffy turned away
He hurt the one he loved most
A soul he fought for
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;D ;D 
