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Post by Rob on Jan 24, 2004 22:53:47 GMT -5
Rob, brilliant new chapter! I have been reading this story with interest. You manage to get the characterisation just right in all of your fiction. I look forward to the next installment eagerly! Thank you very much. It's always great to hear feedback from new people.
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Post by Rob on Jan 24, 2004 22:55:31 GMT -5
Want more. Want more NOW! MORE....COMING....SOON!!!Or at least I hope so. I'm working on it. Thanks for taking the time to post feedback.
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Post by Lola m on Feb 3, 2004 22:03:17 GMT -5
Rob - I didn't find a spot for feedback on your Schoolbus Rock story - so I'm posting here in the hope you see it.
Just read it today and had to let you know how much I liked it. I'm a Xander fan, so of course I appreciated that aspect of it. But mostly, I thought it was a very succinct way of getting both closure for S7 while not closing the door on those who mentally want to imagine "what next". The Willow/Buffy and Xander/Buffy conversations seemed very real and I loved how you rehabilitated Giles. Now I'm moving onto "the T's".
Thanks again for sharing your work here.
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Post by Rob on Feb 4, 2004 2:10:44 GMT -5
Rob - I didn't find a spot for feedback on your Schoolbus Rock story - so I'm posting here in the hope you see it. Just read it today and had to let you know how much I liked it. I'm a Xander fan, so of course I appreciated that aspect of it. But mostly, I thought it was a very succinct way of getting both closure for S7 while not closing the door on those who mentally want to imagine "what next". The Willow/Buffy and Xander/Buffy conversations seemed very real and I loved how you rehabilitated Giles. Now I'm moving onto "the T's". Thanks again for sharing your work here. I'm glad you liked it. "Schoolbus Rock" is my only short story outside of the "Chronicles of Truth" universe. I consider it to be among my better moments...and the funny thing is, I never planned on sharing it. Finally one day I polished it a little and showed it to Patti, who convinced me to put it out there. I hope you like my other stuff too.
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Post by Laura on Feb 4, 2004 10:59:18 GMT -5
Rob! So good! So funny! ("lesbian mystery conception"!) But you're killing me! I had just settled into the chapter and it was over already! AAAAAGGGGGHHH!!!!
(When can I have the next one, please?)
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Post by SpringSummers on Feb 4, 2004 12:02:42 GMT -5
Well . . . continuing excellence on the humor and the characterizations, there, bucko.
Keep it up.
I find myself mostly interested in what is happening with Faith & Xander, and of course, Willow's little surprise . . . I hope F &X are only having a lover's spat, but hey, I'm game for whatever you have in store.
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Post by Patti - S'cubie Cutie on Feb 4, 2004 12:19:39 GMT -5
I'm glad you liked it. "Schoolbus Rock" is my only short story outside of the "Chronicles of Truth" universe. I consider it to be among my better moments...and the funny thing is, I never planned on sharing it. Finally one day I polished it a little and showed it to Patti, who convinced me to put it out there. I hope you like my other stuff too. Patti recommends it Lola.
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Post by Patti - S'cubie Cutie on Feb 4, 2004 12:20:26 GMT -5
Well . . . continuing excellence on the humor and the characterizations, there, bucko. Keep it up. I find myself mostly interested in what is happening with Faith & Xander, and of course, Willow's little surprise . . . I hope F &X are only having a lover's spat, but hey, I'm game for whatever you have in store. He's getting as scary as Joss, isn't he?
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Post by Rob on Feb 4, 2004 20:55:06 GMT -5
Rob! So good! So funny! ("lesbian mystery conception"!) But you're killing me! I had just settled into the chapter and it was over already! AAAAAGGGGGHHH!!!!
(When can I have the next one, please?) The next chapter will probably be finished some time tonight, actually...many of the next several chapters will be fairly short, as they're character and dialogue oriented. Longer ones may well come later...depending on how things go. I'm playing it fast and loose with "Trust."
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Post by Cal on Feb 7, 2004 15:53:15 GMT -5
I'm glad you liked it. "Schoolbus Rock" is my only short story outside of the "Chronicles of Truth" universe. I consider it to be among my better moments...and the funny thing is, I never planned on sharing it. Finally one day I polished it a little and showed it to Patti, who convinced me to put it out there. I hope you like my other stuff too. I loved "Schoolbus Rock", Rob. It was one of the first things that I read when I discovered the S'coobies site. You put into words everything that I wanted to hear. Thank you for that. I love your new chapter of "Trust". Looking forward to the next one. Cal
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Post by Rob on Feb 7, 2004 21:22:08 GMT -5
I loved "Schoolbus Rock", Rob. It was one of the first things that I read when I discovered the S'coobies site. You put into words everything that I wanted to hear. Thank you for that. I love your new chapter of "Trust". Looking forward to the next one. Cal Thanks, Cal. Chapter 18 is finished. Should be available fairly soon.
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Post by Nickim on Feb 8, 2004 11:21:42 GMT -5
Thanks, Cal. Chapter 18 is finished. Should be available fairly soon. Glad to hear it. It's getting really tense, and I want to read it all at once. Impatient much? I especially liked the exchange between Willow & Cordelia.
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Post by Rob on Feb 9, 2004 3:00:20 GMT -5
Glad to hear it. It's getting really tense, and I want to read it all at once. Impatient much? I especially liked the exchange between Willow & Cordelia. Thanks. It's funny...I wasn't spoiled on Cordy's death on the show. Now I don't know if I want to do what I had planned for her in this one...dammit. Joss should message me about these things.
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Post by Cal on Feb 11, 2004 19:42:03 GMT -5
Another great chapter Rob! I had to rush off and read it as soon as I knew it had been posted. You never fail to deliver. Can't wait until the next installment. Don't leave it too long - I want to know what happens next! Cal
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Post by SpringSummers on Feb 14, 2004 20:11:01 GMT -5
Nice writing job, again Rob.
I again find myself gravitating mostly toward the F/X thing, and wanting to know what will happen there. That last bit between them sounded so nasty and hurtful - youch.
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