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Post by ellie on Jun 17, 2003 18:43:00 GMT -5
Spring-
Yours is one of my favorite ficlets- I particularly admire the depiction of Spike's inner combination of wilness and sweetness-
And now- what about another fictlet set between Killer In Me and First Date wherein Spike and Buffy confront the moments after he awakens to a world she has given him chipfree.
I mean "no one expects the Spanish Inquisition..."
ellie
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Post by SpringSummers on Jun 17, 2003 19:09:57 GMT -5
Spring- Yours is one of my favorite ficlets- I particularly admire the depiction of Spike's inner combination of wilness and sweetness- And now- what about another fictlet set between Killer In Me and First Date wherein Spike and Buffy confront the moments after he awakens to a world she has given him chipfree. I mean "no one expects the Spanish Inquisition..." ellie Hmmm. Not a bad idea. I worked on a snippet that was about Buffy's thoughts as she sat in the bathroom post AR and pre-Xander walking in on her, and continued Spike's conversation with Clem before he leaves, etc. . . but it was just so sad and depressing, I put it away. I will give some thought to this idea, and thanks for your nice words about my one and only story. I enjoyed doing it. |
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Post by ldelrossi on Jul 30, 2003 17:17:38 GMT -5
"He's in love with her. He won't leave her, he can't have her, and he shouldn't want her."..."He sits in the candlelight, utterly bereft.."
Those lines made my heart ache. I can see Spike's face clearly with all of his emotion.
Thank you, it was wonderful.
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Post by Karen on Jul 31, 2003 15:23:16 GMT -5
Thank you, Spring, for your heartbreaking story. This especially touched me: I could just feel Spike's utter hopelessness and helplessness.  |
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Post by SpringSummers on Aug 5, 2003 7:20:12 GMT -5
Thank you, Spring, for your heartbreaking story. This especially touched me: I could just feel Spike's utter hopelessness and helplessness. Sandy, Lori - thanks for your nice comments. I really tried to make that story reflect how the characters truly seemed to me at that point in time. I have tried to work on some more, and have two "half-way" done, but I am just not satisfied with them. |
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