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Post by SpringSummers on Sept 16, 2004 7:36:24 GMT -5
It moves the story along and sets a heck of a problem in place! I'm assuming anyone reading this has read the story thus far...right? if not, read no further! by putting the magic bubble around the world, they can't go zooming off into another dimension - can't zap the dragons back - they have to find the solution in 'our' - 'their' world...makes it harder, which also means no cop outs .... and we still don't know how they got out of that alley! Do we? And when? was it four days, a week, a few weeks? seems like time is wonky..... And may I mention Goh’d Xillastra? *LOL!* Yes - Vlad has put some interesting conditions on the whole thing. And that title: Deep doo-doo. With Dragons that big, I'm sure that's one of the major problems. Poor Africa! Nice work, Vlad. Your characters rang true and your Spikey dialogue was especially good.
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Post by Lola m on Sept 25, 2004 19:13:55 GMT -5
It moves the story along and sets a heck of a problem in place! I'm assuming anyone reading this has read the story thus far...right? if not, read no further! by putting the magic bubble around the world, they can't go zooming off into another dimension - can't zap the dragons back - they have to find the solution in 'our' - 'their' world...makes it harder, which also means no cop outs .... and we still don't know how they got out of that alley! Do we? And when? was it four days, a week, a few weeks? seems like time is wonky..... And may I mention Goh’d Xillastra? *LOL!* Yep. You've taken the words out of my mouth, Patti. The bubble really puts them right in the thick of it, doesn't it? And the big bads are . . . well, pretty damn big! You've done it again, Vlad! Yay! But also - eeeeek! 'Cuz now it's gonna be even harder to get our guys out of this mess they've gotten themselves into. Space is wonky, time is wonky, they're still wonky and don't how they got where they are. I'm really looking forward to the next installment. Lola
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