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Post by Karen on Sept 9, 2004 10:52:20 GMT -5
Hee! Sandy Shores....Sandy S ores R o t. Loved the 'Tara' moment, the Buffy not leaving Spike in a hole with everything falling in around him, and the running thru the rain naked visual and wrapping with furniture covers. I can't wait to hear what Dawn is the key to. Thanks Patti! et, all! I'm really enjoying your story.
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Post by Lola m on Sept 9, 2004 13:07:56 GMT -5
Fab job, Patti! I can echo a lot of what Laura and Karen have said. (Sandy Shores **snortle**, and Hummers **snicker**)
I also very much like how you "resolved" each bit of ongoing action and got our gang back together (minus Dawn - oh dear, Dawn's in trouble) in a new location, ready to meet the next wave of adventuring. Very neat bit of storytelling.
We have more information about Ranger Smith to chew on and another creepy manifistation of TFE.
Not to mention the very funny: "Buffy!" "Xander!" "Buffy!" "Willow!" "Oh, look. It's Buffy and Spike." Heee!
Lola
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Post by Patti - S'cubie Cutie on Sept 9, 2004 20:14:02 GMT -5
Nice job Patti!
I liked the parts about not liking Hummers (hee!) and "Sandy Shores Resort" (teehee!).
I also liked the action parts -- getting everyone together in one place.
Now -- where's Dawnie? More! More! [/size][/quote] Thank you Laura! Dawnie is in Rob's hands now....metaphorically speaking...
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Post by Patti - S'cubie Cutie on Sept 9, 2004 20:15:07 GMT -5
Hee! Sandy Shores....Sandy S ores R o t. Loved the 'Tara' moment, the Buffy not leaving Spike in a hole with everything falling in around him, and the running thru the rain naked visual and wrapping with furniture covers. I can't wait to hear what Dawn is the key to. Thanks Patti! et, all! I'm really enjoying your story. thank you so much! We are slow...but we kinda like it too. *smile*
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Post by Patti - S'cubie Cutie on Sept 9, 2004 20:16:53 GMT -5
Fab job, Patti! I can echo a lot of what Laura and Karen have said. (Sandy Shores **snortle**, and Hummers **snicker**) I also very much like how you "resolved" each bit of ongoing action and got our gang back together (minus Dawn - oh dear, Dawn's in trouble) in a new location, ready to meet the next wave of adventuring. Very neat bit of storytelling. We have more information about Ranger Smith to chew on and another creepy manifistation of TFE. Not to mention the very funny: "Buffy!" "Xander!" "Buffy!" "Willow!" "Oh, look. It's Buffy and Spike." Heee! Lola oh thank you Lola! Praise is a wonderful thing! *smile* I really need to do more of it myself. And Lola, I'm working on following your chapter in the S'cubie RR - I WILL get it finished tonight no matter what!
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Post by SpringSummers on Sept 13, 2004 10:59:41 GMT -5
Hee! Sandy Shores....Sandy S ores R o t. Loved the 'Tara' moment, the Buffy not leaving Spike in a hole with everything falling in around him, and the running thru the rain naked visual and wrapping with furniture covers. I can't wait to hear what Dawn is the key to. Thanks Patti! et, all! I'm really enjoying your story. Ditto on the above, Patti. I have never tried to write the characters in their Season 7 personas . . . I think it would be quite a challenge. You done real good!
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Post by Patti - S'cubie Cutie on Sept 13, 2004 15:00:18 GMT -5
Ditto on the above, Patti. I have never tried to write the characters in their Season 7 personas . . . I think it would be quite a challenge. You done real good! thank you very much Spring!
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Post by Cal on Sept 13, 2004 15:24:56 GMT -5
I agree with everything that everyone else has said. Just wonderful!
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